对已经拿到的offer不满意？ 这样协商：
Dear Study Group,
I hope this email finds you well. I am reaching out to discuss my preference for the International Year One course at Leeds University, as opposed to the International Relations program that I have been offered.
First and foremost, I would like to express my gratitude for the offer of a place in the International Relations program. However, upon careful consideration, I have come to the decision that it is not my first choice of study. My preference lies in pursuing a course in Business and Marketing, as it aligns better with my academic interests and career aspirations.
I firmly believe that studying Business and Marketing will provide me with a solid foundation and relevant skills to thrive in the dynamic global business environment. It will enable me to develop a deep understanding of marketing strategies, consumer behavior, and business management principles.
With this in mind, I would like to explore the possibility of switching my program of study from International Relations to Business and Marketing within the International Year One course at Leeds University. I believe that this adjustment will allow me to fully capitalize on my educational journey at the university and set me on the right path towards achieving my academic and professional goals.
I would greatly appreciate your support and guidance in considering this request. I am more than willing to provide any additional information or documentation that may be required to facilitate this process. Your expertise and assistance in finding the best solution for my academic journey would be invaluable.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. I eagerly await your response and the opportunity to discuss the available options.
Sincerely, [Your Name]
尊敬的Study Group团队，
我希望您一切顺利。我写信是为了与您联系，就我在利兹大学的国际一年级课程的实际想法进行讨论。
首先，我要感谢您为我提供了国际关系课程的录取。然而，在经过深思熟虑后，我意识到这并不是我首选的课程。我更倾向于选择与商业和市场营销相关的课程，因为它更符合我的学术兴趣和职业志向。
我相信学习商业和市场营销将为我提供更好的学术基础和相关技能，使我能够在全球商业环境中取得更好的发展。这将使我能够深入了解营销策略、消费者行为和商业管理原则。
考虑到这一点，我希望能够得到您的支持和指导，探索将我的课程从国际关系转换为利兹大学的国际一年级商业和市场营销课程的可能性。我相信这样的调整将使我能够充分发挥利兹大学的学习机会，并确保我在实现学术和职业目标的道路上选择了正确的方向。
我非常期待进一步讨论此事，并愿意提供任何额外的信息或文件，以促进这一过程。我非常重视您的专业知识和帮助，以便找到最佳解决方案来满足我的学术需求。
感谢您对此事的关注。期待尽快收到您的回复，并讨论可行的选择。
真诚地， [您的姓名]
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